In picture books, 500 words (or less) is the goal for narrative fiction and non-fiction…. so character development has to happen quickly, and memorably. Your protagonist needs to capture hearts in just a few lines.
Here’s how:
Give them a clear want or need.
What does your character long for? This drives the story and helps readers relate and take the emotional journey alongside them.
Show a quirk or contradiction.
The most memorable characters are a little unexpected. Think of The Pigeon, Olivia, or Scaredy Squirrel. They’re not just “cute”—they’re distinctive.
Let their voice shine.
A strong voice makes characters leap off the page. Consider using dialogue or inner thoughts to reveal personality. What specific word or syntax choices do they use that reveals their background, attitude, or point of view?
Try This:
Can you describe your character in one sentence without using physical descriptors? (Hint: Focus on what they want and their emotional arc.)
Ex: “A bossy, big-hearted pig who wants to be in charge—but learns to listen.”
At Picture Book Summit on October 4, I will be giving a presentation on Word Count Wizardry: How to Say More with Less. Join us for more strategies that maximize character with minimal words!
