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	<title>Comments on: Penning Picture Books, #3 &#8211; Icing Vs. Cake (or, Verse Vs. Prose)</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Nov 2009 03:21:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: SCB (SmallCityBeth)</title>
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		<dc:creator>SCB (SmallCityBeth)</dc:creator>
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		<description>Hi, Emma -- just a note. I tried to click on the survey link but all I got was the title and a blank screen. Should I have been more patient and waited? Does it take a while to load? Is the survey over?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Emma &#8212; just a note. I tried to click on the survey link but all I got was the title and a blank screen. Should I have been more patient and waited? Does it take a while to load? Is the survey over?</p>
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		<title>By: Amy Isgro</title>
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		<description>This was very interestin. I don&#039;t write verse myself, not being a natural at the rhyming part. or the meter for that matter! I much rather write prose , go straight to the matter. But if I were to try my hand at verse, must I do rhyming words? What about the meter part? Amy Isgro</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This was very interestin. I don&#8217;t write verse myself, not being a natural at the rhyming part. or the meter for that matter! I much rather write prose , go straight to the matter. But if I were to try my hand at verse, must I do rhyming words? What about the meter part? Amy Isgro</p>
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		<title>By: Renata</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Nov 2009 00:39:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My name is Renata, I live in Brazil. I teach biology to high school students (15 to 18 years). I love my job but my dream is to teach children. For that I am doing a course in Visual Arts. I soon have my little students and, of course, we read his books. My son loves to read their booklets. 
About what you wrote, I think it must be very difficult to write a text in the form of poetry! I loved your comment: &quot;Dr. Seuss is an anomaly&quot;! How does he do it? 
Hugs and much success! 
Tenderly 
Renata</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My name is Renata, I live in Brazil. I teach biology to high school students (15 to 18 years). I love my job but my dream is to teach children. For that I am doing a course in Visual Arts. I soon have my little students and, of course, we read his books. My son loves to read their booklets.<br />
About what you wrote, I think it must be very difficult to write a text in the form of poetry! I loved your comment: &#8220;Dr. Seuss is an anomaly&#8221;! How does he do it?<br />
Hugs and much success!<br />
Tenderly<br />
Renata</p>
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		<title>By: SCB (SmallCityBeth)</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Nov 2009 21:15:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you! This is very good advice, well stated, and it is definitely something I needed to hear. I&#039;ve been working (sporadically) on a verse picturebook text, and when I hold it up to the clear light of this post, I realize that it has many holes in it. Thanks for sending me back to the drawing board (well, computer screen) on this one!

Perhaps in your course you could take this a little further, and talk about the difference between writing poetry, and trying to write a story in verse? I find that the discipline of writing poetry, specifically lyrics, is a very good exercise for expressing one&#039;s thoughts in a very structured format, keeping the emphasis on the correct syllables (this can be very glaringly awkward in a song, if the unaccented syllable of a word falls on an accented note), being concise, rhyming without resorting to odd grammatical contructions, etc. This, however, is *very* different from trying to tell a story to a child while maintaining rhyme and rhythm.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you! This is very good advice, well stated, and it is definitely something I needed to hear. I&#8217;ve been working (sporadically) on a verse picturebook text, and when I hold it up to the clear light of this post, I realize that it has many holes in it. Thanks for sending me back to the drawing board (well, computer screen) on this one!</p>
<p>Perhaps in your course you could take this a little further, and talk about the difference between writing poetry, and trying to write a story in verse? I find that the discipline of writing poetry, specifically lyrics, is a very good exercise for expressing one&#8217;s thoughts in a very structured format, keeping the emphasis on the correct syllables (this can be very glaringly awkward in a song, if the unaccented syllable of a word falls on an accented note), being concise, rhyming without resorting to odd grammatical contructions, etc. This, however, is *very* different from trying to tell a story to a child while maintaining rhyme and rhythm.</p>
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